I am a student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. my name is Josh i play soccer my cass room is room 12 my teacher is Miss lzelle my favourite movie is harry potter please Remember wen you post a comment mach it go
I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Great job! Your similes are really cool. Is Hayley a dog? You even did an extra simile which is awesome, great to see you are going above and beyond what the activity asks I like how you used yourself in the last two as well.
I’m looking forward to seeing more amazing work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Josh,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Great job! Your similes are really cool. Is Hayley a dog? You even did an extra simile which is awesome, great to see you are going above and beyond what the activity asks I like how you used yourself in the last two as well.
I’m looking forward to seeing more amazing work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel